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Thinkpanache.in- Suggestions and Corrections:

1)   Plan prices for the 4 different categories are not updated in the following link. The content is same everywhere:

http://thinkpanache.in/pricing/

2)   Office address not updated at the bottom next to home icon.

3)   The letter C must be capitalized in Home Automation intro on the homepage.

4)   The sentence “in our smart home” must be replaced by “of your smart home” in the Home automation intro on the homepage.

5)   The sentence “in any room of your home with just one touch” must be replaced by “in your desired room with a single touch” in Audio and Video Zoning intro on the home page.

6)   The sentence “wherever you are all using our smartphone” must be replaced by “on the go through your smartphone”.

7)   The sentence “and have been internationally certified for long-term durability and standards” could be replaced by “and have been certified in accordance with international standards for long term durability” in the Feel The Power Of Internet Of Things section.

8)   The sentence “by pitching wired automation solutions are better and more reliable” could be replaced by “by pitching about the reliability of wired automation systems” in the Feel The Power Of Internet Of Things section.

9)   Comma is missing after the word scalable in Feel the Power of Internet of Things section.

10)               The word ‘replaceable’ is misspelt as ‘replacable’ in Feel the Power of Internet of Things section.

11)               Adequate photos not updated in the Gallery section.

12)               The sentence “is dedicated to improving” must be replaced by “is dedicated to improve” in the Who we are section.

13)               “Features of Think Panache” section could explain each point in an interactive manner. (similarly for all sections that contain points)

14)               The term “environmentally friendly way” could be replaced by “environment friendly way” in the Lighting Automation Section.

15)               The sentence “can change colours to white, yellow etc. or can change colour temperatures to warm, cool, neutral as per the requirement and features available” can be replaced by “the colours of lights or their temperatures as per the requirement and available features.

16)               The sentence “important role in playing around” must be replaced by “important role in playing around with” in the Lighting Automation Section.

17)               The sentence “are on, whether the doors are locked” can be replaced by “are on and whether the doors are locked” in the Home automation section.

18)               The word ‘usual’ must be removed from the sentence “usual daily schedule”, as they both mean the same.

19)               “With our home automation systems, you could easily set up a home automation system that opens your main door or turns ON your lights and televisions as you reach home, all through a single tap from your smartphone. An opposite “leaving home” event could turn off all unnecessary appliances or devices which can help you save electricity by avoiding circumstances in which you fail to switch OFF your appliances.” (Replacement text for 2^nd paragraph’s 1^st sentence in black text under Home automation section).

20)               “Relax and entertain” should be replaced by “Relax and get entertained” in the Home automation section.

21)               The sentence “And be reassured—while at home or away—that things are safe and sound” must be replaced by “And be rest assured that wherever you are, your things are always safe and sound.” In the Home automation section.

22)               The sentence “With one touch” could be replaced by “with a single touch, you can” in the Home automation section.

23)               The sentence “Or, have your house respond to your schedule and needs without touching anything at all.” Could be replaced by “You can make your house function on the basis of your requirements and schedule without even touching anything.”

24)               The text, “We are all busy and home automation may be able to help make things a bit easier for you” could be rewritten as “In our busy life, home automation could indeed make our life much easier than before” in the Home automation section.

25)               The last point in Features section could be rewritten as “Gives you a sense of control and peace of mind with a range of devices such as remote, voice, app, switch and the Internet thereby improving the overall convenience” in the Home automation section.

26)               The sentence “rejuvenates our well-being from our busy life” could be replaced by “rejuvenates ourselves in our busy daily life in the Audio and the Video Zoning section.

27)               The second sentence in the same paragraph could be rewritten as “Despite music bringing harmony to our life in some way or the other, most of us fail to consider it seriously so as to make maximum use of it or to lead a luxurious life”.

28)               The sentence “listen to engaging music in any room of our home with just one touch on our smart device” could be rewritten as “listen to engaging music in a room of your choice with a single touch, right from your smart device” In the Audio and Video Zoning section.

29)               The sentence, “Now, music can be heard in any room we are in our home without compromising on our comfort.” Could be rewritten as “now, music could be played in any room of our home without compromising on our comfort levels.” In the Audio and Video Zoning section.

30)               The sentence “according to their mood, all from their smart device,” could be replaced by “according to the mood from his smart device.” In the Audio and Video zoning section.

31)               The fifth point in “Features of the Solution” section must be replaced by “Compatible with all kinds/ types of standard power amplifiers and speakers.”

32)               The sixth point in “Features of the Solution” section could be replaced by “Audio input and output for all common music sources with a 3.5 mm plug.”

33)               The word ‘all’ must be cut from the sentence “wherever you are all” in the Smart Safety and Security Systems section.

34)               The sentence “Lights with motion sensor will be helpful in night scenarios where you can move quietly without disturbing your partner with pre-set mild light scene.” Could be rewritten as “Lights with motion sensor will be helpful during nights where you can move quietly without disturbing your parent with pre-set mild lights” in the Smart Safety and Security Systems section.

35)               “Get now” buttons not working in Packages section.

36)               The Official Address needs to be updated in the “Contact us” section.

37)               No blogs available in the Blogs section. Also only default content is available in a foreign language.

38)               Contents for all the links at the bottom (Privacy Policy, Terms & Conditions, Shipping Policy, Refund Policy and Pricing Policy) are not yet updated.